Today we were learning how to write better sentences.So I wrote this paragraph about me in at the beach.So have a look and I hope you enjoy.
“OUCH , OUCH” I screamed out loud. It was a very hot day and we were at the beach. As I was walking on the sand it felt like my feet were going to burn. I quickly ran to the water, “ahhhhh” it was much better. Knew I should have brang my jandals.
Awesome work Taunese. I especially like how you used speech marks in your paragraph to show how the character was feeling.
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