Guess what I did in the Holidays?First we went to chipmunks at Pakuranga,we went there because it was my little sisters birthday.I went on the big slid,when I went down it was so cool.
Then we went to the McDonalds, we had a big feed.After that we went to my brothers rugby game at Pakuranga.It was so cool that they won Against Pakuranga!
Finally we got home and had a party with our cousins and Aunts and uncles.We had BBQ,Ice Cream Chocolate Cake and Lollies.
At last since we were so tired and had a big day,we went to sleep.It was so fun and hopefully we would have another party like that.here is my paragraph rubric that I marked.
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